Amnesia

She opened her eyes;

She felt the writhing pains,

and the antiseptic smell sickened her even more.

She caught the glimpse of the man

standing next to her bed.

She slowly spoke, “Who are you?”

He smiled, “You need more rest, darling”.

Feeling weary, she closed her eyes,

While he turned away and closed his,

to fight back his tears.

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